Isaac C Lalduhawma Poet Rhyme

Melancholic Life

The road I walked is mend
With emptiness and loniness
Fake words, fake friend
Everything turns to nothingness
High in the sky with hope
Pulled down to earth by reality
Hanging on a tight rope
Lies,are words of equality
Sirens sings songs of rave
Illusions, they appear coy
Wooing me closer to the grave
I am just a foolish boy
Looking for angels in this life
But demons only i find 
None to protect and keep me safe
At times I wish i was blind
Speak with their fiery breadth
Light just seem to vanish
As i fall unto their wrath
Am i about to perish?
Broken but not beaten I steadfast
Learning and living i kept on
For i know this life is vast
Untill the end I shall endure on

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Skat A November 29, 2014 at 10:59 PM Isaac, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT" Isaac C Lalduhawma December 2, 2014 at 6:20 AM Thank you so much SKAT will defanately drop by and i really hope we can become really good friends Hugs, Isaac

Cona Adams November 19, 2014 at 9:00 AM Welcome to poetry soup. You will find true friends here, and enjoy positive feedback on your work. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt words. Isaac C Lalduhawma November 20, 2014 at 4:18 AM Thank you so much Cona. It really feels great being here, Isaac

Victoria Anderson-Throop November 18, 2014 at 10:18 PM It is not easy to share and become vulnerable by putting forth your emotions. This is a great way to do it. You will find this site has many people ready if you want assistance. Welcome, Isaac! Victoria Isaac C Lalduhawma November 18, 2014 at 10:23 PM Thank you so much Victoria. I know i have a long way to go so please don't hesitate to point out mistakes and errors i have made. Isaac

Casarah Nance November 17, 2014 at 8:28 PM Welcome to poetrysoup Isaac. Wonderful to have you hear, and a great first poem. I enjoyed the flow to it, you did have a few spelling and punctuation errors, but no biggie, your words rolled right well after each other. I am looking forward to reading more of your writes. Isaac C Lalduhawma November 17, 2014 at 8:35 PM Thank you very much. And i will try to improve my punctuation and spellings. Please bear with me as i am still learning

Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2014 at 12:07 PM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Isaac - I choose your first deep and well written poem - Great rhyme - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Isaac C Lalduhawma November 17, 2014 at 8:06 PM Thank you very much Annie. This is one of the first poems i have written and i was really nervous about posting it here. And im really happy that people are really actually reading it and commenting it :). And i will do comment and read others poem