Alisa Cook Poet I do not know?

Meeting You

enoughter year has come and gone life left me a sight of hope meeting you was like a story 
told.
just  enougher oh day nothing anew the same old things i alway's went threw .
the same old day the sun dident shinne ,but life was a surprize when your hand touched mine
the connaction of us spirked  like a fire  of burning to know our hearts desire's .
the touch of your heat on that chilly cold day took all the dread and worry's away.
gave me hope for something new ,what god sends is got to be true i look in your eyes a 
story  of two and wonder just how we became as two ,turning our two into only one that our 
life went thew the dew . now renewing our life for 2009 . 
i'm so gald god send me you ........ too  mike r. bulter)

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Rebecca Pasco July 13, 2009 at 7:28 PM good description without being to specific.I have a question fro you?i was looking to see who was online to see if neone knew what (ADULT CALIBER)means.I mean what would it mean to write that type of poetry?

Mohammad Yamin January 5, 2009 at 12:17 PM Alisa, The poem expresses your elegant thoughts and feelings succesfully - a novel write. Thanks for reading my poem You Didn't Come and your encouraging comments. Happy New Year. -Mohammad

Christopher Higgins December 28, 2008 at 9:50 AM wonderfully written..flowed very well.