Meet You In the Skies

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Once when I was traveling across azure sky, I was startled to see a lone giraffe going by, It roamed with grace, head up in the clouds, As if born to be remote, from earthy crowds. In my hot air balloon, I got a bird's eye view, The giraffe looked straight into my eyes, too! I went all around the world in my red balloon, Yet, that was the finest sight, like June moon. Written on 2/9/2023 For: Balloons Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/15/2023 6:44:00 PM

Now that is quite a sight! Don't quite know who is more surprised, the balloonists or the giraffe! Keep smiling, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/15/2023 8:18:00 PM

It's an experience to be told and retold. As to the surprise of it all, I'd say it was a draw. Still smiling, Evelyn :D

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2023 11:38:00 AM

A creative/fun~~write/picture. I really enjoyed this one. Have a great day writing away.............

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/12/2023 11:50:00 AM

So nice to know you enjoyed this poem, Paula. Thank you very much for your nice comments. Happy Sunday!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/12/2023 5:22:00 AM

You crafted a great poem, Evelyn. The imagery you used is of the highest caliber.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/12/2023 9:13:00 AM

You have my heartfelt thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/12/2023 1:37:00 AM

I really fancy your imagery, Evelyn. It is always first class. Best for a win.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/12/2023 9:12:00 AM

Thank you for your valued comments.