Meditative An Open Form

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NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

MEDITATIVES burning shame reclusive & ascetic depicted concentration in a muted panoply of humdrum existence continuously & meticulously shuffled a lyrical intensity discovered suspending time in memorable images unveiled modesty passionate in poetic celebration quiet enigmatic pure: flirteing with abstraction an emphasis upon time-stopping stillness sensuouality in making which confounds distinctive often recurring in elaborate pieces infinitely arranged in intricate configurations imbued contours an ensemble of painted cornucopia quivering yearning clustered subtly caressed seeking solace in the surrounding void in cautious togetherness cloaked casting long shadows transforming the everyday with inanimate transcendency

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Date: 1/22/2023 6:27:00 AM

This takes the breath and makes my spirit rise to read it. So beautiful with vivid sensory images. Stunning, Brian.