Notes About The Poem

NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

Meditative An Open Form

MEDITATIVES

burning shame
 reclusive
& ascetic
 depicted
 concentration
in a
 muted
panoply
of humdrum
existence
continuously
&  meticulously
 shuffled

 a lyrical
 intensity
 discovered
 suspending time
in
 memorable images
  unveiled
 modesty
 passionate
in
 poetic celebration

quiet
 enigmatic
pure:
 flirteing
 with abstraction
an
 emphasis upon
 time-stopping
stillness
sensuouality
 in
 making
 which confounds

 distinctive
often recurring
in
 elaborate
 pieces
  infinitely
arranged
in
 intricate
configurations
imbued
 contours
an
 ensemble
of painted
cornucopia
 quivering
yearning
clustered
 subtly
caressed
 seeking solace
in
the
  surrounding void
in
cautious
togetherness
cloaked
 casting
 long shadows
 transforming
the everyday
with
 inanimate
transcendency
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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January 22, 2023 at 6:27 AM
This takes the breath and makes my spirit rise to read it. So beautiful with vivid sensory images. Stunning, Brian.
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