Meditation

from the black hole of silent cerebellum drifting sensation adsorbs unseen thoughts with captive consciousness touches the cherishing beauty of the blinking new stars hanging in the carnal abyss speaks the feeling of enlighten eternity in meditation

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2013 1:17:00 AM

enlighten eternity. What a marvelous thought!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/14/2013 2:38:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/13/2013 1:16:00 PM

meditative state. yes this discribes it.

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/14/2013 2:37:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2013 1:13:00 AM

You successfully steered the readers on meditative state, Baldev

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/10/2013 9:39:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for your comment of appreciation. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/9/2013 8:37:00 AM

- Beautiful but still a little sad, bl my friend - Hope all is well with you.- Missed you in the past weeks !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/9/2013 8:43:00 AM

Many thanks for your visit and for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl