Meditation

from the black hole of silent cerebellum
                                drifting sensation adsorbs unseen thoughts
                      with captive consciousness touches the cherishing beauty
                          of the blinking new stars hanging in the carnal abyss 
                          speaks the feeling of enlighten eternity in meditation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 1:17 AM
enlighten eternity. What a marvelous thought!!
Devnath  Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 2:38 AM
Many thanks my friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl
Loving Iii Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 1:16 PM
meditative state. yes this discribes it.
Devnath  Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 2:37 AM
Many thanks my friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 1:13 AM
You successfully steered the readers on meditative state, Baldev
Devnath  Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Many thanks my friend for your comment of appreciation. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 8:37 AM
- Beautiful but still a little sad, bl my friend - Hope all is well with you.- Missed you in the past weeks !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Many thanks for your visit and for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl
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