Medicine, Undissolved

The first small steps
Upon the stones of freedom
Taste sharp and chalky:
Like medicine, undissolved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 10:00 AM
Deb, cool words..David
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May 11, 2012 at 5:56 AM
what a wonderful analogy! bravo!
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