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Mechanical Animals

T.V controls us Telling us right from wrong I long to say I like it this way Like mechanical animals Here we are The TV’s radius Doesn’t go far

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2010 2:23:00 PM

Good one!

Sue Mason

Date: 10/31/2009 2:34:00 PM

Never have been a couch potato ... LOL ... wonderful write here, Steve. Been quite awhile since you've posted here at the Soup. Hope you return soon !!

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/24/2009 5:35:00 AM

Good write Steve. I'm not sure what you are saying, but I disagree. Bill

Rob Alexander Mayoralgo

Date: 7/22/2009 11:13:00 PM

Just too honest. Good job.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/22/2009 9:45:00 PM

i guess it is a great influence but it is we who decide what we do or don't do in the end, showing the difference from weak and strong minded people, but then again a lot of kids are raised on t.v but who's fault is that? not t.v but a def good write.

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 7/22/2009 6:17:00 PM

I agree with Carolyn also, and if it's not the TV it's the computer..or video games, all turning our minds to mush. You did a great job to make people stop and think..thank you for you comments on my featured poem also. ~Trudy~

John Freeman

Date: 7/22/2009 3:06:00 PM

Hi, I was here, and read, read twice what Carolyn said! My sentiments too, sorry, God bless Moses.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/22/2009 2:55:00 PM

Great statement on the power of the media in controlling our lives, Steve. We "mechanical animals" need to look to a higher power to find a better path. Excellent write! Love, Carolyn