Meandering Stream

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Turning a Monoku into a Haiku - inspired by our friend and mentor, Paul Callus.

July 13, 2023

meandering stream 
                                 splashes on pebbles, whispers ~ 
                                        sad tales of lost love

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2023 4:38:00 PM

Love this, Mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2023 4:45:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. “Stream” imagery comes back to me again and again…probably from my Indian culture.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/13/2023 9:13:00 PM

I do like the imagery and feelings in this verse.. Awe , Paul's inspiration.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2023 8:36:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Eve. I learned to write limerick inspired by your contests.