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Meandering Stream

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Turning a Monoku into a Haiku - inspired by our friend and mentor, Paul Callus. 

July 13, 2023

 

meandering stream splashes on pebbles, whispers ~ sad tales of lost love

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2023 4:38:00 PM
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Love this, Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2023 4:45:00 PM
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Thanks, Andrea. “Stream” imagery comes back to me again and again…probably from my Indian culture.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2023 9:13:00 PM
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I do like the imagery and feelings in this verse.. Awe , Paul's inspiration.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2023 8:36:00 AM
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Thank you, Dear Eve. I learned to write limerick inspired by your contests.

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