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Turning a Monoku into a Haiku - inspired by our friend and mentor, Paul Callus. 

July 13, 2023

 

Meandering Stream

meandering stream 
                                 splashes on pebbles, whispers ~ 
                                        sad tales of lost love
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Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 4:38 PM
Love this, Mala.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 4:45 PM
Thanks, Andrea. “Stream” imagery comes back to me again and again…probably from my Indian culture.
Roper Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 9:13 PM
I do like the imagery and feelings in this verse.. Awe , Paul's inspiration.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Thank you, Dear Eve. I learned to write limerick inspired by your contests.
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