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We meander off the beaten path, A veritable sally, Admiring the flight of lively swallows Above the green vast valley. Puffy white clouds form and reform, Methinks, one looks like a galley. The twittering birds in perfect harmony, Look like a rally. Sheep graze here and there, How lovely to be able to dilly dally. We find some rest beneath a shady willow And steal a kiss from my pretty Sally. One Kiss? What a poor show, Finally, I could not keep the tally. Enchanted and happy, We just meander back to our alley.

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Date: 12/8/2021 5:07:00 PM
A pleasant day along the way. I enjoyed to meandering and the imagery as we walked, Victor. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Date: 12/8/2021 11:20:00 AM
Like aways, beautiful imagery and heartfelt warm feelings. Hugs and lots of Love Eve
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Date: 12/6/2021 2:52:00 PM
Lovely Victor. There is something so special about a quiet walk together. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/5/2021 10:58:00 AM
That’s lovely Victor, bouncy and lively, what joy is to be had with Sally down in the valley… Belle
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Date: 12/4/2021 5:10:00 AM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this one. I like the romantic content. It reminds of a poem Pink Dominoes by Rudyard Kipling. Thanks for the visit to my poem and taking time to comment. I have written a comment there for you to read. Sara
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Date: 12/4/2021 12:27:00 AM
Such a sweet poetry, Victor... "Puffy white clouds form and reform, Methinks, one looks like a galley" I loved these lines as I do that usually, is not it a fun to envisage shapes on clouds... A very enjoyable read...
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Date: 12/3/2021 8:58:00 PM
I love the rhyming and the vivid, romantic images of delight, Victor. Enjoy your weekend, my friend. :)
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Date: 12/3/2021 7:02:00 PM
Simply joyful and romantic, Victor:) peaceful too:)
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Date: 12/3/2021 6:04:00 PM
Oh this is superb, Victor, simple, straight forward, and excellent..A Fav.
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Date: 12/3/2021 1:42:00 PM
Meandering of the beaten path can bring joy for you and Sally :) hugs
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Date: 12/3/2021 12:02:00 PM
The lyrical tone of this love story makes it a joy to discover. Those images and sensations are incredible, Victor. Kisses on eager lips while strutting into the alleyway to escape intruders and dawdles provide a wonderful surprise. Blessings,
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Date: 12/3/2021 4:17:00 AM
What a lovely way to meander...Delice
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Date: 12/3/2021 3:10:00 AM
Lovely rhythm to this romantic episode. Great imagery and emotions, Victor.
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Date: 12/3/2021 3:05:00 AM
Very romantic verse Victor, being with the one you love and amongst nature can't be beaten. Tom
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Date: 12/3/2021 2:20:00 AM
Nice rhymes flowing through a romantic pen Victor... Enjoyed reading... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 12/3/2021 1:46:00 AM
Enjoyed your sauntering into the alley to hide away from all intrusions and to dilly dally, exchanging the pleasantry of planting kisses on craving lips. Beautiful Victor !
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