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Meander In the Valley

We meander off the beaten path, 
A veritable sally,
Admiring the flight of lively swallows 
Above the green vast valley.

Puffy white clouds form and reform,
Methinks, one looks like a galley.
The twittering birds in perfect harmony, 
Look like a rally.

Sheep graze here and there,
How lovely to be able to dilly dally.
We find some rest beneath a shady willow
And steal a kiss from my pretty Sally.

One Kiss?  What a poor show,
Finally, I could not keep the tally.
Enchanted and happy, 
We just meander back to our alley.

Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2021

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Bill Baker Date: 12/8/2021 5:07:00 PM A pleasant day along the way. I enjoyed to meandering and the imagery as we walked, Victor. Thanks for sharing, Bill Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/8/2021 11:20:00 AM Like aways, beautiful imagery and heartfelt warm feelings. Hugs and lots of Love Eve Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 12/6/2021 2:52:00 PM Lovely Victor. There is something so special about a quiet walk together. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 12/5/2021 10:58:00 AM That’s lovely Victor, bouncy and lively, what joy is to be had with Sally down in the valley… Belle Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/4/2021 5:10:00 AM I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this one. I like the romantic content. It reminds of a poem Pink Dominoes by Rudyard Kipling. Thanks for the visit to my poem and taking time to comment. I have written a comment there for you to read. Sara Login to Reply

Supraja Kannan Date: 12/4/2021 12:27:00 AM Such a sweet poetry, Victor... "Puffy white clouds form and reform, Methinks, one looks like a galley" I loved these lines as I do that usually, is not it a fun to envisage shapes on clouds... A very enjoyable read... Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 12/3/2021 8:58:00 PM I love the rhyming and the vivid, romantic images of delight, Victor. Enjoy your weekend, my friend. :) Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 12/3/2021 7:02:00 PM Simply joyful and romantic, Victor:) peaceful too:) Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/3/2021 6:04:00 PM Oh this is superb, Victor, simple, straight forward, and excellent..A Fav. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/3/2021 1:42:00 PM Meandering of the beaten path can bring joy for you and Sally :) hugs Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 12/3/2021 12:02:00 PM The lyrical tone of this love story makes it a joy to discover. Those images and sensations are incredible, Victor. Kisses on eager lips while strutting into the alleyway to escape intruders and dawdles provide a wonderful surprise. Blessings, Login to Reply

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 12/3/2021 4:17:00 AM What a lovely way to meander...Delice Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/3/2021 3:10:00 AM Lovely rhythm to this romantic episode. Great imagery and emotions, Victor. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/3/2021 3:05:00 AM Very romantic verse Victor, being with the one you love and amongst nature can't be beaten. Tom Login to Reply

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 12/3/2021 2:20:00 AM Nice rhymes flowing through a romantic pen Victor... Enjoyed reading... God bless... ~ Ani Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 12/3/2021 1:46:00 AM Enjoyed your sauntering into the alley to hide away from all intrusions and to dilly dally, exchanging the pleasantry of planting kisses on craving lips. Beautiful Victor ! Login to Reply