Premiere Contest WinnerMeadowlarks

meadow grass swaying
as larks serenade their mates. . .
wind softly sighing


June 20, 2019
For Tania Kitchin's Birds Or Bees Haiku Poetry Contest
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Hello Andrea, I can hear the song being sang. have a nice day my friend.
Rodgers Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Congrats as always form is secondary to content
Carmack Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Congrats Andrea!
Iqbal Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Congratulations a well deserved win indeed
Ravidas Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 3:16 PM
A true western haiku as it is. Did I say true? No, an outstanding. Congrats, Andrea. Perfect meadows and skies.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Congrats Andrea, a well deserved win. Hugs Rick.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 3:01 AM
Gorgeous. Congratulations on your gold trophy win, Andrea. Well deserved.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 1:45 AM
Wow, a trophy win with this lovely haiku Andrea. Brilliant! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
Callus Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 4:45 PM
What a lovely image, Andrea! I'd love to be in that meadow! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Mcgee Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:18 AM
Beautiful Andrea. Congratulations on your first place win.
Gilmour Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 2:49 AM
Many congrats on your beautiful win Andrea. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 9:27 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved medal win. Do they really do that?
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 10:41 AM
are you asking if larks serenade? I looked it up on google and listened to their song. It was lovely!
Gauthier Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 8:40 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Andrea. Well done.
Leiser Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:52 PM
Congrats on your top trophy win, Andrea! Loved the imagery in your excellent haiku! :)
Kitchin Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:52 PM
Andrea congratulations on your first place trophy win, this is a gorgeous haiku with beautiful imagery, enjoyed!
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June 21, 2019 at 6:23 PM
This is fantastic. It is a great imagery poem. I see it all.
Sergi Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 5:54 PM
Lovely haiku, Andrea: Best Wishes in the contest!
Devonshire Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 12:05 PM
A lovely image, Andrea. Best wishes in Tania's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Pandit Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:20 AM
I hear their songs..lovely haiku, Andrea.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:43 AM
A gentle sweetness; now I want to know what a meadow lark looks like!
Roper Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 10:00 PM
lovely haiku, Andrea, good luck in the contest. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 9:41 PM
Swaying, serenading and sighing...me :)
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 8:42 PM
You have done it with this haiku, as you have with so many of your wonderful poems that I have read, Andrea. You have created an indelible image, 'the wind softly singing,' resonating with the reader forever. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Just as I thought, you didn't need any 'luck' in this contest, as your skillful write sent your meadowlarks soaring to the top pedestal of the winner's stand. Congrats, Andrea! :) gw
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