Yanny Widjanarko Poet Haiku

Me Versus 4th Grader - Part 2

Bed Time Story

Day already low --------------------------> Hazelle
Standing owl coo, coo in time ---------> Me
Waiting for a tale-------------------------> Hendrickson

Sun

Huge ball of fire ---------------------------> Hendrickson
It gives us light, heat and warmth ----> Hazelle
The window of bliss ----------------------> Me


Author's Note:
This is another haiku which I and my twins students made, they were really excited when doing these haikus :)

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Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2013 at 2:28 PM Hello Yanny, the haiku pairing sounds like fun... Love this... xox~PD Yanny Widjanarko February 6, 2013 at 4:37 PM Hello Linda, thank you for your visit, and glad that you like it :D - hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux January 13, 2013 at 2:21 AM Wonderful that you are passing you love of words and ideas to your young students. Yanny Widjanarko January 13, 2013 at 4:00 AM Thank you Richard :) I the one who should thanked you for making such an inspiring poem, and its really an honor for me :D, wishing you a warm sunshine :D Richard Lamoureux January 13, 2013 at 2:22 AM Have a wonderful day Yanny, thanks again for the terzanelle.