Me Seeking Serenity

A poem by me,
perhaps serenity,
but thinking all the while,
poetic serenity
makes me smile.

Then some silly simile
invades the space,
and even active denial
of poetic paternity
puts a frown on my face.

When it hits me,
like an "as" out of place,
an inert referal 
to moronic modernity,
invading more of my space.

It is not my poem
that will make me serene,
but the calming thought of creation,
through poetic humanity,
that brings the smile back to my face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 28, 2026 at 8:40 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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