Me Dad

Didn't make old bones, me dad,
Taken from us far too young
Barely reached his sixties when
He was killed by Farmers’ Lung.
Too many dusty threshing days,
Noxious fumes dipping sheep,
He seemed to live a life
Just to eat, work and sleep.

A farm labourer which made
Him a man of many skills,
No time for a doctor’s visit,
No time for potions and pills.
Loved greenhouse and garden
But he loved even more
Lonely walks across the fields
Carrying a loaded twelve bore.

Not a sportsman shooter,
No, everything he shot
Very gratefully accepted 
Into the family cooking pot. 
A man of quiet wisdom who
Set me standards to live by
And most importantly showed.
A man at times is allowed to cry.

We never really did talk much
Never did have much to say
Sitting watching the old TV 
In our quiet companionable way. 
He looks back at me in the mirror,
As I look back at him with pride
So glad I could be with him
At his side the day he died.

I sat there with quiet pride
For I really hadn't suspected
That my dad had been 
So very well respected.
The church was packed
On his funeral day 
Most of the village came to
Quietly send him on his way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Volumes Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:47 AM
A lovely surprise to see your wonderful poem Terry. Its a terrific feeling to have a Dad that you can be so proud of. I too was one of the lucky ones in that respect. Its easy to imagine your Dad the way you describe him, and easy to see why you turned out such a good bloke.
Bauer Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:54 PM
a touching and beautiful tribute to your dad, terry! it's always a pleasure to read your work - i've missed it!
Ireland Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 1:02 AM
Thans as always for your support Ilene
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