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Me and the January Leaf

Me n the January Leaf. Morning prayers, tweets of bird Wrinkled Sundays,olives in curd All took fathoms to drag me out From the blanket of laziness, letted me meet The crisp n cold but fresh n bold Blow of year 2014. "What!" I screamed as year 2013 Left me unbade, I complained I whimped Then the 'January Leaf' fell n dewed "Like now I can't be fixed, I can't be mixed 'TIME' greatest of all couldn't be rekicked, surf forth To play with unceased waves that waved."

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Skat A

Date: 6/17/2015 3:48:00 PM

Rajat, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2015 2:44:00 PM

Rajat, this is a wonderful poem. :), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@