Kash Poet Poet Nonet

Me and My Agonies

Trapped inside a burning compartment
surrounded by my agonies
in search of an escape route,
claustrophobia grips,
will they strangle me?
time running out...
they're closer,
help me 
out!





© kash poet
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Placement:3rd;(June 2012)

Contest:Imagination

Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

By:kash poet

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Gwendolen Song June 16, 2012 at 10:41 PM Powerful insight to a claustrophobic mind...I am a member of the claustrophobia club too! Welcome! It;s hell in here! Congrats Kash! Great job!

Sara Kendrick June 14, 2012 at 3:54 PM CCCCCongrats on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards June 14, 2012 at 2:04 PM So intense, and describes what perhaps is the daily nightmare of someone with a real-life mental breakdown......well done, scary but could be so real for some people!

Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2012 at 12:50 PM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Tanya Harrington June 14, 2012 at 11:30 AM Congrats and WOW what a scene you paint. enjoyed it....Tanya

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 14, 2012 at 1:23 AM Congratulations Kash, I feel trapped in with this one, well done xx

Poet Destroyer A June 13, 2012 at 9:10 PM KASH, congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2012 at 12:51 PM hmmm, let's forget TPS counter.. you win!!.. yipeeee..:) huggs! Nette Onclaud June 13, 2012 at 1:03 PM please note source of syl count for claustrophobia.. thanks!!.:)

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2012 at 12:28 PM kashi... i'm looking for the 6 syl count line.... love this and yet, a winner in my heart..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2012 at 10:05 PM Hey did this just get judged?? I see you won. Congrats. Let me run and grab one of my chapbooks to give you another new phrase to start out a poem: "Recalling dances underneath the ( ) moon. " PUt any adjective you want inside the parentheses. Maybe do a tanka or try a sonnet. It's a line that appears in one of my sonnets. now I am outta here, Kash!! Finally.

Jack Horne June 12, 2012 at 1:02 PM wow, this one is so powerful, Kash. Many congrats on your wins : )

Debbie Guzzi June 12, 2012 at 12:40 PM claustrophia is a NO FUN thing! YIKES..good luck kind sir! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud June 12, 2012 at 10:23 AM yoohoo!!..:) huggs, kashi

George Aul June 12, 2012 at 10:02 AM Good write........... George

Dinda Minardi June 11, 2012 at 8:43 AM Your agonies become real and strangle you.. A very creative imagery, Kash. :)

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2012 at 9:06 PM Great imagination you have, I really like this, Kashinath. After I did mine, I realized it was not packed with a lot of emotion such as yours and others I have read. I wish she had given us the chance to write with two nonets!!!

James Marshall Goff June 10, 2012 at 2:11 PM Been there, Kash Poet, nicely done! Jimbo

Nette Onclaud June 10, 2012 at 1:09 PM hopping by to greet you a fine day, kashi... :) huggs!

Russell Sivey June 10, 2012 at 12:32 PM Talking about imagination, this is filled with awesome and creative imagination! This is an incredible and grandiose write my friend! Great Work!!

David Williams June 10, 2012 at 12:02 PM Kash nice take on the picture, good luck..David

Wilma Neels June 10, 2012 at 11:41 AM You took me there with you with this Nonet Kash, all the best for Nette's contest!! :) Wilma

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2012 at 7:21 AM Well written kash, wish you luck in contest! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise