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Me and My Agonies

Trapped inside a burning compartment
surrounded by my agonies
in search of an escape route,
claustrophobia grips,
will they strangle me?
time running out...
they're closer,
help me 
out!





© kash poet
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Placement:3rd;(June 2012)

Contest:Imagination

Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

By:kash poet

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/16/2012 10:41:00 PM

Powerful insight to a claustrophobic mind...I am a member of the claustrophobia club too! Welcome! It;s hell in here! Congrats Kash! Great job!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/14/2012 3:54:00 PM

CCCCCongrats on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/14/2012 2:04:00 PM

So intense, and describes what perhaps is the daily nightmare of someone with a real-life mental breakdown......well done, scary but could be so real for some people!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2012 12:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Tanya Harrington

Date: 6/14/2012 11:30:00 AM

Congrats and WOW what a scene you paint. enjoyed it....Tanya

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/14/2012 1:23:00 AM

Congratulations Kash, I feel trapped in with this one, well done xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/13/2012 9:10:00 PM

KASH, congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2012 12:51:00 PM

hmmm, let's forget TPS counter.. you win!!.. yipeeee..:) huggs!

Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/13/2012 1:03:00 PM

please note source of syl count for claustrophobia.. thanks!!.:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2012 12:28:00 PM

kashi... i'm looking for the 6 syl count line.... love this and yet, a winner in my heart..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2012 10:05:00 PM

Hey did this just get judged?? I see you won. Congrats. Let me run and grab one of my chapbooks to give you another new phrase to start out a poem: "Recalling dances underneath the ( ) moon. " PUt any adjective you want inside the parentheses. Maybe do a tanka or try a sonnet. It's a line that appears in one of my sonnets. now I am outta here, Kash!! Finally.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/12/2012 1:02:00 PM

wow, this one is so powerful, Kash. Many congrats on your wins : )

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/12/2012 12:40:00 PM

claustrophia is a NO FUN thing! YIKES..good luck kind sir! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/12/2012 10:23:00 AM

yoohoo!!..:) huggs, kashi

George Aul

Date: 6/12/2012 10:02:00 AM

Good write........... George

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/11/2012 8:43:00 AM

Your agonies become real and strangle you.. A very creative imagery, Kash. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2012 9:06:00 PM

Great imagination you have, I really like this, Kashinath. After I did mine, I realized it was not packed with a lot of emotion such as yours and others I have read. I wish she had given us the chance to write with two nonets!!!