Anisha Dutta Poet Couplet

Me and Dad

ME AND DAD

                          Once in Annual Exam, shocking jerk!
                           I missed rank and prize only for one mark.

                           One mark on aggregate of eight hundred!
                         Injustice! The child took it for granted.

                        Next year first rank placed me in highest glee.
                       Second score reached forty marks behind me.

                       Dad embraced me, 'My child! Feeling so fine. 
                       Your success is more joyful than that of mine.
   10/12/17
               
'Any Rhyme form: An Early Childhood Memory'  Contest by Line Gauthier

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Eve Roper April 25, 2018 at 9:04 PM Congratulations on your win, Anisha, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*

Susan Gentry April 25, 2018 at 5:18 PM Congratulations on your win. Wonderful poem of a memory.

Line Gauthier April 25, 2018 at 10:34 AM Well done, Anisha - wish your poem was longer. Congrats.