Me An Ocean

I was a land that was steeper
I became an ocean that was deeper

The waves in me were silent
And the view around was grimmer 

The Moon wasn't there
Everything looked gloomy and in despair

Where was that shine I used to have?
Or it wasn't a shine but a betrayal

When all is lost, something you get
It's a wonder, and now I don't regret

It's when you dived in
The tides became gushing

You pulled me out from there,
To the shore that was never far but so near

Was it you who found me or was it me who found you,
doesn't matter because we are together now

On the shore, we are standing now,
The sun is shining with colors of wow

The only thing I want till the end
is your side by my side and your hand in my hand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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June 3, 2023 at 11:49 AM
That's my first ever posted poem. I hope you'll like it. I welcome all kinds of advice to improve my poems. I am a newbie, a humble poet, I need your advice!
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