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Me An Ocean

I was a land that was steeper I became an ocean that was deeper The waves in me were silent And the view around was grimmer The Moon wasn't there Everything looked gloomy and in despair Where was that shine I used to have? Or it wasn't a shine but a betrayal When all is lost, something you get It's a wonder, and now I don't regret It's when you dived in The tides became gushing You pulled me out from there, To the shore that was never far but so near Was it you who found me or was it me who found you, doesn't matter because we are together now On the shore, we are standing now, The sun is shining with colors of wow The only thing I want till the end is your side by my side and your hand in my hand

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Date: 6/3/2023 11:49:00 AM
That's my first ever posted poem. I hope you'll like it. I welcome all kinds of advice to improve my poems. I am a newbie, a humble poet, I need your advice!
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