Paul Beadnall Poet Narrative

Me Against Myself

A multitude of subjects clouded the fall,
         i tryed and i tryed but, couldn`t stand tall,
           i felt i didn`t have a friend on the earth,
            the feeling so bad i didn`t feel worth,

             Anything to anybody that i could see,
              but seeing it now,that wasn`t to be,
                my family and friends, were always there,
                  to stand beside me and show they care.

                    I met a girl,whom i later married,
                     rose my spirits,my soul was carried,
                       lifted up and now that cloud...
                        has brightened,my daughter and grandson and now grand daughter,i`m so proud.




Paul beadnall..29/6/11.. for contest "Me against myself"

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2011 at 4:52 AM Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Me Against Myself" contest Paul. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2011 at 8:52 PM Very nicely done, congratulations on your win!

Cory Long July 5, 2011 at 5:18 PM congrats on your win with this fine piece cory

Dr.Ram Mehta July 5, 2011 at 2:32 PM My congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Paul

Michael J. Falotico July 5, 2011 at 2:08 PM Congrats my friend.... well done and well written...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 5, 2011 at 1:35 PM congrats paul on your fantastic win with this dynamic write ..excellent luv..enjoy..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 28, 2011 at 6:05 PM Fine rhyming poem , quite unforced one. paul. Thanks for asking

Cory Long June 28, 2011 at 5:30 PM this is great nicely done... cory Cory Long June 28, 2011 at 5:30 PM oh yeah don't forget to change the form!!!

Cory Long June 28, 2011 at 2:42 PM this was awesome see soup mail!

Ingibo Benson June 27, 2011 at 9:47 AM It's like a narrative in simple language. I love the first stanza more. Lovely write, Paul.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 27, 2011 at 8:16 AM sweetly romantic paul and a grand tribute of lines to your family luv... beautiful poetry ..impressive write luv..