Me

The pages of my story keep turning
Even though these words I've considered burning
For the tale they tell is one of tragedy
Pathetic and of "me"

I do not see rainbows
Or butterflies
My vision has been blurred
By all the tears I've cried

In this game called life
I'm forced to follow others' rules
I've tried to fight it
But either way I look like a fool

Even my conscience 
Has taken on their voices
Even in my mind
They control my choices

I live in fear
I am not free
I haven't been allowed
To discover "me"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Anne Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 12:42 PM
I enjoyed your piece.. blessed be
Burchett Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Congrats great poem,very moving and true in life .
Shuaibu Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 2:23 AM
WHAT A SAD BUT VERY NIIICE POEM.
Durrani Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 2:21 AM
Rachel.... Congrats on your win. The first two verses are so beautiful, just love the way you express your words holding back all that fears in you.
Mullan Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 3:22 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Rachel. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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January 16, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Rachel...CONGRATULATIONS on the week`s winner!!:) oxox love Anne-Lise
Kearley Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 6:49 PM
You remind me of myself... :o)
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