Me

I’m so sad I’m so happy All so me I’m so fat I’m so thin All so me I so love Him I so need help All so me With so much sh.te I so need a beer All so me

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Jessica Bowie

Date: 7/17/2010 4:56:00 AM

interesting I like the wording

Daver Austin

Date: 3/28/2010 8:16:00 AM

I don't understand "sh.te" but am just screwed up enough to dig the rest. Like this mucho! Love, daver

Bathsheba Bathsheba

Date: 3/28/2010 4:57:00 AM

I like this write Nigel - It says so much - Thanks for sharing -:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2010 2:15:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry today Nigel. It was a very enjoyable poem. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/26/2010 1:41:00 PM

I need one to cheers nice write faleshia