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I have walk through the tunnel of life burned down the kingdom of burdon and strife seen through the eyes of GOD and yet my heart still hurts inside I have walk upon the river of shame in my mine I am the only one to blame In my life of abandonment only and angry person was born For them to believe that all evil is gone Is for their souls to walk with the unborn I have glanced at the future and saw only but pain men minds are empty so hard for them to sustain money and gold their is no gain fires only the smell of propane This that I see OH GOD it's so real to me It's harder then a knife this thing i speak of is life time and time again life was gone again not naturally but by men war upon wars they seem to have no end peace and love come back again the people have fed the world a pain how long do we thank it will sustain i put my heart and soul into this will they stop and listen to the abiss the world is coming to and now later and again...

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Date: 6/11/2009 6:42:00 AM
very touching.
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:54:00 AM
i love this one, very touching
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:56:00 PM
This so true the cycle of life is forever revolving....great job and welcome to poetry soup!
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Date: 3/25/2009 7:37:00 PM
Kevin, some of best efforts are born of such pain. I can sense great hurt in your words, but I like the way you beckon peace and love to return at the end. Nice work!
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:34:00 AM
I think i was in a little pain when i wrote this
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