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Rainbow Sky By Mahtab Bangalee


Rainbow on the cloud
Wandering to south
Dyeing high
Charming sky


© Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
12/03/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 8:29 PM
Dyeing high…cool descript, Mahtab!
Bangalee Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 3:08 AM
Thanks dear poet
Turner Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 7:56 AM
I see the rainbow clearly, Mahtab. Pay no attention to narrow minded people. Keep penning:)
Bangalee Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 10:44 PM
Thanks a lot dear Poet for your kind encouragement
Wakeling Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 12:09 AM
This has no meaning for me because words are missing
Bangalee Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 10:54 PM
Well, Dear Reader, I humbly appreciated your comment and understood that this has no meaning for you but this has meaning for me because the game of poetic words has various flowing which makes a poet introvert to an extrovert through the expression. Though I'm not a poet, but as a human, I have an inner strength to express myself and the above writing is its feedback.
Turner Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 6:13 PM
PS is a site for encouragement and support. It is also a place to learn and sharpen one's talent. If you don't have anything supportive or encouraging to say, then don't say anything. This young man has not been writing very long, if you have some useful information that will help him understand what you don't understand. Email him and help him out. He is a human being. He has feelings.
Wakeling Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 4:26 PM
THIS HAS NO MEANING FOR ME BECAUSE WORDS ARE MISSING
Turner Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 7:54 AM
perhaps if you were to soup mail this young man and offer assistance he would understand. Criticism without guidance is worthless. Obviously English is not his first language. You should be a little more understanding and kind. Another thing, poems are open to interpretation. If you don't understand maybe it is you who needs help.
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