Mayfly Moment

An echo of delight- harmonic minds in flight, meet in unison to write and create ekphrasis from another's sight.

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John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2010 6:45:00 AM

Awesome Lanterne! Magnificent job on Contest, Brian. Thanks you for having me. Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/13/2010 5:05:00 AM

What a beautiful outlook...and poetry. (Aren't mayflies also called Love-bugs? The bugs that bond to car windshields in masses in spring?) I love to see them floating. They remind me that "Love is in the Air!" Nice write, Brian.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/12/2010 5:57:00 AM

good one ("v")

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2010 5:20:00 AM

Very creative, Brian. Great form and imagery. You really do work well in many forms of poetry. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2010 6:19:00 PM

A rather difficult form to write and rhyme at the same time but u have done an excellent write here Brian.. luv that title too..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/11/2010 3:33:00 PM

Love the idea of echoing another's thought! Which is just what we do, when we read and are inspired by another poet on the Soup.~ Love, Carrie.....and ps...thank you for the honorable mention on your last contest, Brian. I always enjoy writing for your inspiring challenges! :)! Thanks as always!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2010 12:33:00 PM

Interesting write ...And whose harmonic mind might you meet in flight..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara