Mayfly Moment

An
echo
of delight-
harmonic
minds
in
flight,
meet in
unison to
write
and
create
ekphrasis
from another's 
sight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 6:45 AM
Awesome Lanterne! Magnificent job on Contest, Brian. Thanks you for having me. Agape, Moses
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 5:05 AM
What a beautiful outlook...and poetry. (Aren't mayflies also called Love-bugs? The bugs that bond to car windshields in masses in spring?) I love to see them floating. They remind me that "Love is in the Air!" Nice write, Brian.
Culverhouse Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 5:57 AM
good one ("v")
Devonshire Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 5:20 AM
Very creative, Brian. Great form and imagery. You really do work well in many forms of poetry. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 6:19 PM
A rather difficult form to write and rhyme at the same time but u have done an excellent write here Brian.. luv that title too..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Richards Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Love the idea of echoing another's thought! Which is just what we do, when we read and are inspired by another poet on the Soup.~ Love, Carrie.....and ps...thank you for the honorable mention on your last contest, Brian. I always enjoy writing for your inspiring challenges! :)! Thanks as always!
Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Interesting write ...And whose harmonic mind might you meet in flight..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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