Mayflies

ephemeral   cloud  
zillion  life  cycles  daily  
brahma sleeps  awhile 

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Notes: 
In Hindu Cosmology Brahma goes to sleep for a period of 4.32 
billion years, which is a period of time equal one day (of Brahma) 

The Life of the Mayfly (Ephemeroptera) is very short (ephemeral) , typically one day when it has to find food, mate, lay eggs and die.

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Puddifoot Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 4:28 AM
interesting haiku with depth, well done! thank you for passing by with your comments
Gazbowski Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:27 PM
enthralling haiku.
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:22 PM
GREAT contrast in your haiku!!
Misra Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Thank you, Andrea.~karam~
Callus Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Thanks for a lovely write and the info which you provided, Karam; makes it all easier to comprehend. There is always something new to learn! ~ Regards // paul
Misra Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Paul. I have begun to realize that it is sometimes necessary to put up explanatory notes due to the beautiful cross-cultural milieu of poets here on PS. (And it is a pain to refer to the www when in the midst of a reading).~karam~
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