Mayerling, Part 2 of 4

The Lady-in-Waiting's Tale 

There's nothing matters, girl, beyond The Ring! 
Are you betrothed yet? Me, I'm six months in. 
Hussars are handsome. Want to know the truth? 
A tale of passion, sex, idealistic youth 
and parents crippled by stiff protocol. 
The girl? I hardly dealt with her at all, 
some minor baroness (Hungarian blood). 
At Mayerling, in the Vienna Woods 
is where they did it. Yes, I've seen them dance 
together. The mazurka! One brief glance 
that flits between two lovers tells the world. 
His wife was one thing - but he loved that girl! 
The night before, there was an argument 
between him and the Emperor. He spent 
his final night with her at Mayerling. 
Oh, how romantic! Since their heady fling 
was doomed - they couldn't be together now, 
and wouldn't be apart - they took a vow 
to end their lives. Poor things. Look over there. 
That captain. Is he looking, girl? Don't stare!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/22/2017 1:00:00 PM
Nice, to use a little bit of gossip to speculate here, it makes the story lively :) Melikes.
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/22/2017 3:09:00 PM
Good! I tried to tell it as a young, silly girl would see it.
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