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Maybe Now You'Ll Notice Me

how is it you didn't you hear her scream she cried it all in a song for you how is it you didn't taste her tears she served them to you in your precious china how is it you didn't see her hurt she painted it all in a mural for you on the walls of your own home in your bedroom how is it you didn't you feel her pain she knitted it all in a blanket for you wrapped you in it how is it you didn't smell her fear she made you a bottle of perfume the smell overtaking it how is it you didn't read it she wrote it all on your my space maybe because you were blinded but the again she i i wrote it in braille for you i danced it for you you never loved me i wasn't really yours to love i was just rose bud you tended to time to time in your garden of beautifully bloomed long stemmed roses nothing special to you i hope you regret it when i bloom oh wait i have and you do regret it you even wrote it in a song told them to play it on a radio only i didn't hear it i turned the radio off and pick up a book i like reading better anyway

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Date: 1/30/2011 1:48:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight...hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing... check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 1/29/2011 2:25:00 PM
People rarely see what is right in front of their faces, that's the sad truth about human nature. Enjoyed your write! ~Tirzah~
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Date: 1/29/2011 1:38:00 PM
Very expressive and creative write on maybe now you'll notice me, elijah
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