Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

Maybe Just a Thought

If you could change the world
What would the first thing be 
Maybe close down all the zoos
To set the animals free

Maybe get yourself some air time
To tell all people to take a stand
For the rulers of our countries
Have gotten to far out of hand

Maybe tell all of the people
You now have your own lives to live
Though if you want to live them happily
Learn,and use the word forgive

Maybe stop all of the madness
That new technology brings
People used to live without it
And they did just fine without those things

Maybe stop all of the wars
And get everybody watching everyones back
Then we will no longer need to use the words
Steal,kill,murder,war,execution,or attack



Dan Kearley:10-13-12

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Charmaine Chircop November 22, 2012 at 12:17 AM I love the powerful message you're sending in each and every stanza Dan.. Maybe just maybe ...yes! Charma

Richard Lamoureux November 15, 2012 at 11:52 AM Great message eloquently expressed, love this one! You are a guy I would love to sit down and have a cup of coffee with. keep em coming Dan.

Cecilia Macfarlane November 15, 2012 at 10:01 AM I like how your mind thinks Dan....wish more people would think like you do, the world would be a much greater place to live : ) Hugs

Patricia Lewis November 6, 2012 at 8:58 AM Your poem is thought provoking beautiful! Question do you really think if society decided to throw away all of the new technology and release all of the animals this world would be a better place? It is sad to think that us humans crave to have so much control and not let nature take it's true course most of the time! Have a beautiful week. Patricia L

Laura Breidenthal October 28, 2012 at 9:57 PM Nice poem, Dan! Very nice. There are many ways tah change the world --either in a good way or a bad way. I would like to see a free elephant cross the street time and again. ;) Keep up the good work. Always, Laura

Harry Horsman October 26, 2012 at 3:58 PM excellent poem, your message really comes through............

Elizabeth Wesley October 23, 2012 at 1:17 PM There you go, tweaking my brain again, getting excited about all that awful stuff. Need a cold shower to cool the heat. See what you do to me ! Love Lizzie

Carma Sanderson October 22, 2012 at 8:56 PM Woooowww, Dan a stupendous rendition, and reminder of how this world forgets to stop and think to lend a helping hand, to those who need it, and love the important things that can make a difference.... Very powerful words at the end... Loved it!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2012 at 4:37 PM - S-mail - oxox f.e.f.

Sukmawati Komala October 17, 2012 at 10:18 AM awesome thought ...you've shared with all the readers another inspiring thought..thank you Dan...luv your message much <3<3<3 wish you all the best :) SK

Jon A Cavanaugh October 14, 2012 at 2:50 PM To live in an Eden paradise. What a wonderful thought. I can't even find that in my dreams. But your wonderful poem put that thought in my head even if it were for only a moment. Thank you.

Shaz Cheesman October 13, 2012 at 7:35 PM What a thought to ponder 'If you could change the world' sooo many places that one could start. Love the message and flow of your poem Dan - Well done - Shaz

Sabrina Robillard October 13, 2012 at 6:29 PM Beautiful poem... I wish it was true. Great job :)

Jonas L. Rozario October 13, 2012 at 11:04 AM Oh my this is an awesome poem. Some very nice thoughts you have penned here...great message, excellent rhyming...all in all a wonderful poem. Much enjoyed!!!

Terry O'Leary October 13, 2012 at 8:25 AM Great poem... super message! Unfortunaely, a different 'message' is far more widely spread by those (few) who profit from 'the bad stuff'... Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen October 13, 2012 at 4:01 AM I wish it were that simple Dan. - Beautiful thoughts about freedom and happiness. - A perfect world to live in. - Like this poem very well Dan. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox love f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)