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Maybe a Monoku

Don’t worry honey, you will get better they said, confidence I lack.


Contest: One Liner Entertainment
Sponsor: Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2018 7:11:00 PM

you are truly an entertainer, sweet Iowan!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/21/2018 8:49:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I try, I really do.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/20/2018 6:47:00 PM

And now? … months later? … Congrats, Caren, on your win in the contest, and Season's Best to you and your family ~ Gershon

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2018 8:37:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Glad to see you stopping by. I hope your holiday is wonderful! Our school break starts after school tomorrow and we do not return until Jan 7th!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2018 7:15:00 AM

- A wonderful "one liner", Caren :) - Congratulations :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2018 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Have a Merry Christmas Holiday.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/20/2018 6:52:00 AM

Hi Caren, Good one-liner. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2018 6:55:00 AM

Thank you. I am blown away.

Silent One

Date: 12/20/2018 5:29:00 AM

So many would be superstars have suffered from this... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2018 6:56:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. Keep those contests coming!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/17/2018 9:18:00 AM

Nice touch here. Lets the reader do the work, (as Line recommends to me all the time). 'confidence I lack' could be in them; it could be in yourself; it could be in medications/treatment; or it could be in some combination of all three. It's interesting: Write one line, and stimulate such a long response! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/17/2018 5:17:00 PM

Ha ha ha. Love your wordy answer.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/16/2018 5:47:00 AM

Hi Caren! Medicine is the recipe, perfect! Pop would say "let er rip" no worries! Had a buddy went on to play hockey in NHL would always get jacked up playing Canadien Teams, yeah Caren, empowering your bodies' natural immunity inducing adrenal glands requires a wtf attitude, i practice daily & highly endorse! love, james

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/17/2018 12:37:00 AM

Thank you James for being positive and optimistic.

Maybe a Monoku

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