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May In Minnesota

Lightning throbs Sending rain pelting Through me Joyously soaking my soul Home now- Clothes hanging on iron glyphs; Soon to adorn my garden The sun peaks out- Bright red pinecones are forming Like little green Tipped clubs on the Norway Pine Outside my window; My heart entwined with the Budding pinecones Absorbing hope

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/4/2018 10:43:00 PM

G'day James … obviously you very close to nature. You can take something that nobody notices and turn out a very fine lyric. You don't appear to need the big picture at all which I think is great - thank you James - Lindsay

James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/4/2018 10:46:00 PM

is true 'nuff, Lindsay...thanks for stoppin' by...

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/14/2017 6:07:00 PM

James your last three lines of this lovely poem are especially stunning in imagery and thought. Such a superb and shining write throughout that made me smile..'absorbing hope' - I relish the thought..:) and I love thunder, lightning and rain as well!

James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/14/2017 9:14:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, Susan, your words lift my spirits this cold, wintry nite, where daylight is short, skies are gray & it's dark by 5pm...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/7/2017 8:21:00 AM

I am so glad to read this gem ---each word so carefully chosen--each word so full of creation!

James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/7/2017 9:15:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/30/2017 12:54:00 PM

Being from Wisconsin, I can certainly relate to the joys of living in the beautiful scenery you describe here... A lovely poem, James :)

James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/30/2017 4:45:00 PM

Thanks Kelly! going soon to one of my favorite places to picnic in Alma up on top of the bluff!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/9/2017 10:05:00 PM

Always loved the rain, and thunder storms, nice poem!

James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/9/2017 10:07:00 PM

Thanks so much, Arthur!

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/6/2017 11:36:00 PM

Nice picture of spring as we head towards fall. I like the last line a lot. Peace & Love Matthew Ansih

James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/9/2017 10:06:00 PM

Thanks Matthew!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2017 5:30:00 PM

ohh, you delight through this effervescent write, jimbo... could you do an audio of this?...hope you and mom had a fine time... blessings for your father... huggs

James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/4/2017 7:02:00 PM

You make me happy, Nette! I downloaded a google app & will try to figure it out!

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/23/2017 12:13:00 AM

sounds wonderful, this summer has been nothing but forest fires, I would love some rain to joyously soak my soul right about now

James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/23/2017 9:00:00 PM

Thank you Francine!

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 8/22/2017 5:44:00 PM

Beautiful.

James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/22/2017 8:18:00 PM

So kind, Dale!