May In Minnesota

Lightning throbs

Sending rain pelting
Through me

Joyously soaking my soul

Home now-
Clothes hanging on iron glyphs;
Soon to adorn my garden

The sun peaks out-
Bright red pinecones are forming
 Like little green
Tipped clubs on the Norway Pine
Outside my window;
My heart entwined with the
Budding pinecones

Absorbing hope
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Laurie Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 10:43 PM
G'day James … obviously you very close to nature. You can take something that nobody notices and turn out a very fine lyric. You don't appear to need the big picture at all which I think is great - thank you James - Lindsay
Goff Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 10:46 PM
is true 'nuff, Lindsay...thanks for stoppin' by...
Ashley Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 6:07 PM
James your last three lines of this lovely poem are especially stunning in imagery and thought. Such a superb and shining write throughout that made me smile..'absorbing hope' - I relish the thought..:) and I love thunder, lightning and rain as well!
Goff Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Susan, your words lift my spirits this cold, wintry nite, where daylight is short, skies are gray & it's dark by 5pm...
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:21 AM
I am so glad to read this gem ---each word so carefully chosen--each word so full of creation!
Goff Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Deschler Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Being from Wisconsin, I can certainly relate to the joys of living in the beautiful scenery you describe here... A lovely poem, James :)
Goff Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Thanks Kelly! going soon to one of my favorite places to picnic in Alma up on top of the bluff!
Vaso Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Always loved the rain, and thunder storms, nice poem!
Goff Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:07 PM
Thanks so much, Arthur!
Anish Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 11:36 PM
Nice picture of spring as we head towards fall. I like the last line a lot. Peace & Love Matthew Ansih
Goff Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:06 PM
Thanks Matthew!
Onclaud Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 5:30 PM
ohh, you delight through this effervescent write, jimbo... could you do an audio of this?...hope you and mom had a fine time... blessings for your father... huggs
Goff Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 7:02 PM
You make me happy, Nette! I downloaded a google app & will try to figure it out!
Roberts Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 12:13 AM
sounds wonderful, this summer has been nothing but forest fires, I would love some rain to joyously soak my soul right about now
Goff Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Thank you Francine!
Cozart Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 5:44 PM
Beautiful.
Goff Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 8:18 PM
So kind, Dale!
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