May I Ask You

Why should I make love new
And toil over its expression
When just a glance from you 
Boasts not a syllable 
But speaks perfection?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Lovely thoughts penned here
Williams Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 1:46 AM
Jeremy good content, if I could suggest with very little reworking you would have a great tanka here, just a thought...David
Martin Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 10:44 PM
Thank you, David, and thanks for stopping by.
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