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Why should I make love new And toil over its expression When just a glance from you Boasts not a syllable But speaks perfection?

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Date: 2/21/2013 1:50:00 PM
Lovely thoughts penned here
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Date: 2/18/2013 1:46:00 AM
Jeremy good content, if I could suggest with very little reworking you would have a great tanka here, just a thought...David
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/18/2013 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, David, and thanks for stopping by.

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