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May Gifts

I have all May-lent gifts, I do. My own son shines a Taurus smile. He met the world month five, day two. I have all May-lent gifts, I do. Birth-year ends with number five's style. We both sport emeralds bought new. I have all May-lent gifts, I do. My own son shines a Taurus smile. ... CayCay May 10, 2019

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/18/2019 4:56:00 PM

Wow, more than one theme in your lovely Triolet, CayCay! Very clever and beautifully written. Congratulations on your Podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2019 1:59:00 AM

I love how you squeezed several of the themes into the cute poem Caycay, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/17/2019 2:33:00 PM

Lovely, CayCay. Congrats on your podium finish.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/16/2019 1:20:00 PM

So adorable! And congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, gw

John Gondolf

Date: 5/16/2019 8:18:00 AM

CayCay, congrats on your win for this wonderfully written triolet. John

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2019 6:29:00 PM

I loved your entry CayCay and I am thrilled to be in your company in the top three. Congratulations my dear friend! hugs, Connie : ) xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2019 5:40:00 PM

oh, Caycay, I had a feeling this was you because of the hyphenated word!! I adore the line "My own son shines a Taurus smile" and that is what did the trick for me! (and also that you squeezed in the 5's!) Congrats in my contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/14/2019 4:33:00 PM

I love your celebration of your Taurus son in this triolet CayCay. He and I have a lot in common. : ) xxoo

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 5/11/2019 5:27:00 AM

Very charming, CayCay, nice write.