CayCay Godwin Poet Triolet

May Gifts

I have all May-lent gifts, I do.

My own son shines a Taurus smile.

He met the world month five, day two.

I have all May-lent gifts, I do.

Birth-year ends with number five's style.

We both sport emeralds bought new.

I have all May-lent gifts, I do.

My own son shines a Taurus smile.

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Sandra Haight May 18, 2019 at 4:56 PM Wow, more than one theme in your lovely Triolet, CayCay! Very clever and beautifully written. Congratulations on your Podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison May 18, 2019 at 1:59 AM I love how you squeezed several of the themes into the cute poem Caycay, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier May 17, 2019 at 2:33 PM Lovely, CayCay. Congrats on your podium finish.

Gershon Wolf May 16, 2019 at 1:20 PM So adorable! And congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, gw

John Gondolf May 16, 2019 at 8:18 AM CayCay, congrats on your win for this wonderfully written triolet. John

Connie Marcum Wong May 15, 2019 at 6:29 PM I loved your entry CayCay and I am thrilled to be in your company in the top three. Congratulations my dear friend! hugs, Connie : ) xxoo

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2019 at 5:40 PM oh, Caycay, I had a feeling this was you because of the hyphenated word!! I adore the line "My own son shines a Taurus smile" and that is what did the trick for me! (and also that you squeezed in the 5's!) Congrats in my contest.

Connie Marcum Wong May 14, 2019 at 4:33 PM I love your celebration of your Taurus son in this triolet CayCay. He and I have a lot in common. : ) xxoo

Lawrence Sharp May 11, 2019 at 5:27 AM Very charming, CayCay, nice write.