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May Cause Drowsiness

Sleepily, quite tiredly,
Tranquilly and languidly,
Wearily yet hastily-
Bowing to his Majesty
But less concerned and further burned
In all these tales of tragedy

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Debbie Guzzi

March 22, 2014 at 3:11 PM

belatedly reading ;) [I do like repetition as a device] Light & Love

Laura Breidenthal

January 2, 2014 at 1:28 AM

Hm, very interesting.. I'm really enjoying some of your older poems posted. Always, Laura

Just That Archaic Poet

January 3, 2014 at 1:36 PM

Thanks, Laura :)

Robin Davis

October 24, 2013 at 7:22 PM

Chan This is very endearing to the reader because we can all relate to the message in your writing. Nice job my friend Thanks for comparing my poem Fixing Regrets to Cher's song. That is very flattering. Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet

October 24, 2013 at 9:13 PM

See, I don't think it's relatable at all. It seems all dreamy and ethereal; not concrete or solid at all. But I'm glad you found something in it with which to relate :)

Poet Destroyer A

October 19, 2013 at 11:47 PM

Hello Poet, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight <3 =LINDA

Just That Archaic Poet

October 23, 2013 at 7:02 AM

Thanks for letting me know, Linda! :D

John Posey

August 19, 2013 at 12:23 PM

I must say I enjoy your cleverly crafted work. I hope to see more posted... You have a most refreshing style... Hugs to ya.... Jake

Just That Archaic Poet

August 19, 2013 at 4:43 PM

Thank you so much, John. I cannot tell you how many times I've been "brow-beaten" for my style on other sites, hence the name I chose here lol. I've been told countless times how "archaic", "dated", "cliche", etc I am. I sincerely appreciate your encouragement and positive nature; I've really never found such great people elsewhere :)

Richard Lamoureux

August 19, 2013 at 7:34 AM

Definately didn't make me drowsy, well penned and entertaining.

Just That Archaic Poet

August 19, 2013 at 7:39 AM

Thank you, Richard. When I have more time for a thoughtful response, I will be happy to check out your work as well :)

Just That Archaic Poet

August 19, 2013 at 6:33 AM

Thank you for the read and response, Vicky; I appreciate all feedback and responses :)

Vicky Tsiluma

August 18, 2013 at 1:11 AM

Hi, I must say you managed to capture my interest right from the title. I love the way you’ve written so fluidly - your association of sleep, tranquility and tragedy brings to mind the calm and havoc life has to offer before one passes on. Well written. I’m definitely looking forward to read more of your work. Vicky.

Just That Archaic Poet

August 19, 2013 at 11:21 PM

Thank you for the read, response and compliments; it means so much to me after all the abuse I took at other sites. I appreciate the kind words :)

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