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May Bride of Spring

MAY BRIDE OF SPRING

May bride of Spring sheds shades of night
And dons a dress of Emerald green
Now winter’s chills are put to flight
May bride of Spring sheds shades of night
While humble Hawthorne blossoms bright
Like snow upon the hedge now seen
May bride of Spring sheds shades of night
And dons a dress of Emerald green

Copyright © Geoffrey Brewer | Year Posted 2019

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Smita Kulkarni Date: 6/12/2019 1:32:00 PM Loved the bride of spring! Sweet poem! -Smita Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/2/2019 7:44:00 PM Hello Geoffrey Brewer, I think the bride looks good in emerald green. Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/7/2019 5:51:00 PM That is okay my friend. Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/3/2019 6:25:00 PM Hello Geoffrey Brewer, my husband was french,I am Polish Ukrainian.My husband was french yet spoke English and French. I was born in Canada. have a nice evening my friend. Geoffrey Brewer Date: 6/2/2019 8:52:00 PM Sorry for the French. Couldn’t resist it Geoffrey Brewer Date: 6/2/2019 8:35:00 PM Bonjour Mmle de Beaulieu. Merci Beaucoup

Suzanne Delaney Date: 5/24/2019 3:10:00 PM Dear Geoffrey:Such a beautiful song of Spring. The form fits the theme to perfection. Into my Favs. today. SuZ Login to Reply Geoffrey Brewer Date: 5/26/2019 9:33:00 AM Many thanks for your kind words. Suzanne

P.S. Awtry Date: 5/21/2019 11:29:00 PM This is lovely! I have just read these two poems back to back and while this is a gorgeous triolet, you had to sacrifice some of your beautiful lines and bit of story from the original. Login to Reply Geoffrey Brewer Date: 5/22/2019 1:50:00 AM Many thanks P.S. I think that both forms have their points - the inadvertent one I hit on has the potential of a nice rhyme and rhythm pattern. I may try it again under another name

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/16/2019 4:43:00 AM This is gorgeous Geoffrey! Sorry you didn't get to enter it. I struggled with mine for a long time. I had never written a Triolet before. They are a challenge for me. Lovely! : ) Login to Reply Geoffrey Brewer Date: 5/22/2019 1:46:00 AM Our first attempts at this attractive form! I think we may try again. Thanks for your kind comments, Connie.