Mauve Dusk

shadows canvas night -

         giving light to the moonbeams...

                  sweep purple-brown hues









July 12, 2019
Haiku-Hue Poetry contest
Sponsor:  Kim Rodriguez
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Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Beautiful imagery, and Frederic's counsel is wise. This is so true of this site! Well done my friend. Beautiful!
Blodgett Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 4:26 PM
Thank you Caren. I am so grateful for all your wonderful comments, but more than anything for your encouragement and giving me wings!! Lonna
Parker Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Intrigued by your poetry and yet of the five I have read I noticed no comments, I don't know if that is important to you or not but if you leave comments on someone's poem most will leave a comment on yours and thus more people will read your poetry...your poetry is good and should be read...just a thought
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 12:49 AM
This haiku has exquisite imagery Lonna. I noticed you are fairly new here. A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Aloha, Connie : )
Blodgett Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 11:27 PM
I sincerely want to thank you for the information. I have recently started writing poetry after many years of abstinence. There is such importance to that feedback and criticism we need to grow. I will follow your advise and began the process. So happy you enjoyed my poems!
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