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Mauna Kea

sharp wind and snowfall etched name on ancient mountain light archs-cut angles mists circle summit chilled lava rock formations Pele vacations night falls mistily artistic rain brushed dreamscape Mauna Kea sleeps Mauna Kea, located on "The Big Island of Hawaii" is Hawaii's largest Volcano,usually having snow atop the summit year round.

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Date: 9/27/2009 9:20:00 AM
Nice use of imagery for an interesting view. Poetry Soup will post the final winners when they have made their decision. Again, good luck. Thank you for your kind comment. I hope you are getting better. My thoughts and prayers go with you. Karen
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Date: 4/1/2009 4:57:00 AM
Thanks Abe and maryam I appreciate the remarks left and the time to read my scribbles, Koko
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:40:00 PM
this is a lovely series of haiku. thanks for sharing your island with us .....very nice!
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:30:00 PM
this is such a lovely poem!.....it paints a pretty picture...nice form...Maryam~
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Date: 3/31/2009 1:09:00 PM
I wish I were again too Thank you,Carrie!
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Date: 3/31/2009 1:04:00 PM
oh my,...I wish I were there!!! Lovely lovely poem!! ~ Carrie
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