Koko Koomoa Poet Haiku

Mauna Kea

sharp wind and snowfall 
etched name on ancient mountain 
light archs-cut angles 


mists circle summit
chilled lava rock formations 
Pele vacations

night falls mistily
artistic rain brushed dreamscape
Mauna Kea sleeps 

Mauna Kea, located on "The Big Island of Hawaii" is Hawaii's largest Volcano,usually having 
snow atop the summit year round.

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September 27, 2009 at 9:20 AM Nice use of imagery for an interesting view. Poetry Soup will post the final winners when they have made their decision. Again, good luck. Thank you for your kind comment. I hope you are getting better. My thoughts and prayers go with you. Karen

Koko Koomoa April 1, 2009 at 4:57 AM Thanks Abe and maryam I appreciate the remarks left and the time to read my scribbles, Koko

Abe Lopez March 31, 2009 at 4:40 PM this is a lovely series of haiku. thanks for sharing your island with us .....very nice!

Maryam Jameela Haniff March 31, 2009 at 2:30 PM this is such a lovely poem!.....it paints a pretty picture...nice form...Maryam~

Koko Koomoa March 31, 2009 at 1:09 PM I wish I were again too Thank you,Carrie!

Carrie Richards March 31, 2009 at 1:04 PM oh my,...I wish I were there!!! Lovely lovely poem!! ~ Carrie