Matilda's October

Frankly I'll stare blankly into darkness all the time I wish I could and you still in the 
spot you stood saying this time for good I knew you'd stay just like I thought you 
should. Were alone in these vacant woods this situtation aint no good it's been 
sixteen days were misunderstood common sence is on vacation so let's take up 
roots in a new location, light a trail through our duration build a new on this 
foundation show the world to a standing ovation then settle down into salvation 
enjoy the scene a surreal sensation finally give in to our temptations. As I look at 
you your my admiration so there's time for celebration intuition planted in this vast 
constellation let's break this disolation repair unflattering devastation it's our time 
total domination. Tonight we take our place among moonlight break the void escape 
the sunlight into this eve we'll both take flight a wrected hyme we learned by sight 
let's take advantage to much delight. Before October let's set things right in the end 
we shall ascend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/26/2016 9:29:00 PM
Cole B, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:54:00 PM
COLE, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Date: 4/9/2011 3:59:00 PM
Matilda's October makes me smile Have you tried reading it outloud at a whisper? it makes me smile!
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