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my love that i save for you it's still yours, it's still true the time you spend on my mind is constantly all the time the way that i care for you it's still there i still pray for you the way that i feel for you yes, i'll still die for you my adoration is alive and well i'll always be under your spell though my heart is broken it still works taking what love is left and covering up the hurt but my love like a ghost having no where to roam wonders around aimlessly having lost his home some say he'll live and some say he'll die each one having a reason for themselves why but where ever you are there my love will be none of what i feel for you will ever cease

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Date: 10/22/2010 2:53:00 PM
Love stays with you a lifetime and time will heal the loss you feel. You have to give it time. God BLess Phyl
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:26:00 PM
Still expressing your love for the lady..Time heals but one never forgets a loveone whether parents, child, sibling, or mate...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:47:00 PM
Nothing but a heart that has loved unconditionally can express so fluidly what it feels..! Thank you for sharing this with us, JHL! One to my favs. Love, Audrey P.S. And thanks for the comments on "Left Over Dream"..you wondered who was doing the waking??? Let me quiet your curiosity, John..it was only the sun!!!!!
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:23:00 PM
Sweet, romantic, and heart felt, john! You are a faithful man. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/17/2010 12:48:00 PM
Your heart revealed in this write. Hope you draw strength from your writes because nothing I can say will ease the pain. Know that I am thinking and praying for you. This is a beautiful piece John *hugs*
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:35:00 AM
I feel the love and loss, which alot of my writes have....As for Golf, GO FOR IT my friend!!! Nothing to loose.. I always was self concsious about playing because I thought everyone was so good...not true.. at all... Its fun, its healthy and I have made some real nice friends for life out there... keep me posted and any advice I could lend about buying clubs please feel free to ask... Michal
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Date: 10/16/2010 12:36:00 PM
ah..sad but beautiful John..Take care~Deb
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Date: 10/16/2010 9:52:00 AM
enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 10/16/2010 9:49:00 AM
Coming from the heart John. It is hard to lose the one you love and it will take time. I feel your loneliness in this poem. God Bless Phyl
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