Material Desires

Silken seduction
Corduroy like going home
Denim desires

Satin swish swirling
Velvet voluptuousness
Lace laughing lightly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 10:49 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly amazing Sue. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 11:18 PM
what a very clever topic for senryu here WELL done. hey, I have not seen you much lately, have I? It's nice to see these little gems as I sign off. Luv, andrea
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 8:12 PM
And this goes my favorite, Sue
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 8:12 PM
What a fine metaphors you have used to material desired sue. Good luck in the contest
Babcock Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 3:17 PM
You have it all wrapped up. Ha Ha God Bless Phyl
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 2:59 PM
Great descriptiveness and metaphoric language that you have used in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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