Masters of Electric Dawns

Seeing as night 
has come 
           to the frozen lands
we dance on the head of 
    a pine - quite eager 
to pick up the vibes
   of our shadowed homeland
   enchantment circles us
and we are drawn 
     to the well of 
life
which we so loved in the past
   that we wish to drink 
of its cool waters constantly 
  Our fate hangs by a 
       thread
The secret, I believe 
is to renew ourselves 
      continually 
    Let us continue to watch
the sky and earth 
    with a sense of awe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 7:36 PM
Love the way this plays out. REally nice, and hey, of course I know that old Frost poem. Yeah I am always the contradiction of what people normally say and do! WEll, I was here only two hours this time. hahaha. I am gonna get off here and do something worthwhile now like watch tv (heehee) thanks for your welcome comment tonight. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 1:48 PM
Very unique write Matthew and enjoyed reading a creative piece from your gifted pen.. don't forget to enter my GLORY "gods" contest by assuming one of the five choices for 'gods' to enter.. cash prize for this one.. good luck if u do.. thankxxx for your super comments this happy Sunday.. with luv
Culverhouse Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 11:44 AM
enjoyed reading your works today! Hope you are feeling better, I saw you have been sick, take care!!
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