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Master Baker

looking for just the right dirt looking to make brown sugar mud finding so adding sweat and spit and coming along to take on shape kneading doughish needing drips or drops more to keep wet pliable from a bun to a mud pie i create as i speak to try to make a likeness of you my precious

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/21/2019 11:22:00 AM

This one warms me. again, been here, didn't know what to say yet.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/21/2019 11:42:00 PM

The delectable background bits, thank you! More to feast.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/21/2019 10:47:00 PM

It is loosely based on the Jewish creation of a golem. The phrase "I create as I speak" in a way goes back to "In the beginning was the word." Also I ended it with "my precious" from the words of Tolkein's turned into a creature Golum. The book trilogy is very much religious; but the movies have brought a cult following that I hope truly understand.