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Masquerade

Living in a masquerade Hiding our truths in the shade Veiled Behind electronic devices The Physical world Minimises Concealed behind a blue and white light No melatonin released at night Our brains don’t accept it’s time to sleep And every day we’re on repeat A vicious cycle ceases to stop When hid behind our phones and lap top Wanting to be something we’re not Living life through a mobile robot Pupils straining , brains rearranging Photograph your food , words misconstrued We used to wear watches and read paper maps Took photos with cameras , had real contact We spent Summer days out in the fresh air , riding our bikes with the wind in our hair Simulation , stimulation lost inside a lie Isolation, modification , apps that beautify Lacking essential social skills Online Casino gives you thrills Book shops closing , hackers disclosing Filters , snaps of zombies posing Selfie sticks and brains decomposing Judging ourselves With an air of self loathing Expectations of Instant gratification Vulnerable souls face Victimisation Predators and bullies target their prey Illicit pictures on display Conversations overthrown Surrounded by people Yet still quite alone With one selfish text lives become wrecked Took your eyes off the road just for a sec Sirens arriving , little chance of surviving All because of your self-absorbed driving We hold it dearer than humanity Ignorant and lost at sea We need to find our way back to land And release these crutches from our hands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/16/2019 4:45:00 PM
You make me smile... your words are magic.. but sometimes also very tragic.. But what I see and feel is your poetry.. because I know it's very real for you.. and it resonates with me to.. Best wishes you.. DAMO x
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/17/2019 7:08:00 AM
I’m so happy I make you smile Damo :-) , that’s so lovely to hear. Thank you again x
Date: 10/11/2019 5:01:00 PM
There are some men in japan, they have life size dolls and treat them like girlfriends. Reminds me of the movie “Her”.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/13/2019 8:12:00 AM
I don’t think I’ve seen that movie! I did however see a documentary on this. They said if something didn’t change soon, in about 40 years their population will shrink by a third! Each to their own, I try not to judge but it can’t be healthy to live like that :-) x
Date: 9/29/2019 6:59:00 AM
There is so much truth in your words, Elaine. I miss the way things used to be, those “wind in your hair” days, but I fear we’re too far gone to ever return. All the best to you. John
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thanks John , yes Unfortunately I think you may be right :-) x
Date: 9/26/2019 8:28:00 AM
It’s interesting that we are craving connection and with our devices we are supposed to be more connected. Instead we are more emotionally disconnected than any other time in history.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/26/2019 10:22:00 AM
True and unfortunately I can only see this getting worse with time as technology becomes more advanced x
Date: 9/21/2019 8:59:00 AM
You did a great job capturing a snapshot of today's culture.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/21/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thank you :-) x
Date: 9/20/2019 9:16:00 AM
3Snap Wonderful from title to end... " Simulation , stimulation lost inside a lie Isolation, modification , apps that beautify" _ congrats on feature....***Niyna I also second Gerson Wolf. Clean fun... Riding bikes on windy days..
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/21/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much , so happy you enjoyed it Niyna :-) x
Date: 9/18/2019 5:33:00 PM
I really like the line 'riding our bikes with the wind in our hair.' … Each generation has its unique challenges, I guess. We certainly had ours. :) gw
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/19/2019 7:15:00 AM
Thank you Gershon :-) x
Date: 9/17/2019 3:26:00 PM
You bring out some truths of reality in this present age sad to say, Elaine, but liked it for its poetic craft with nice rhyme.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/19/2019 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Gordon :-) x
Date: 9/15/2019 12:18:00 PM
Hello Elaine, it seems that the computer ,cells phones has taken over to communicate with one another face to face. It does not seem right. Have a nice day my friend. x
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/16/2019 7:34:00 AM
Hello Darlene, thank you for your comment. It’s a sad and scary truth x
Date: 9/14/2019 5:20:00 AM
Very well put. You've touched upon some very good points that are worthy of considering, especially the self absorbed driving. God bless you
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/14/2019 9:29:00 AM
Thanks so much for the feed back Regina. I’m glad you enjoyed it x

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