Mashed Potato

Do you exist just to survive
or would you like to make decisions 
to help your body thrive

Five years of endurance from the age of ten
nightly menu of mashed potato, cold roast meat
no greens no fruit,nothing else, if you didn't like the food it was hunger
There was not another thing to eat

Daily morning breakfast, nutritionally no better
a bowl of corn flakes and a cup of tea
Consumed in a household of two smokers
good health could never hope to be

Many coughs, colds, tired
and aching in the ears
Life a daily challenge
full of many fears

Boils upon the legs the head
often near the nose
Fatigue, fall asleep in class
a life of daily woes

Adversity has a purpose 
it makes us stronger or we fall
Decisions to be made 
when our backs are to the wall

And the decision that was made fifty years ago
turned his life around
Modified his eating patterns
the old days had now run aground

In his house there are no smokers
a large variety of orqanic greens, nuts and fruits
His exceptional state of well being reflects 
the selection of his culinary pursuits
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Winter Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 5:44 PM
I really liked the ending, the person grew up and changed his diet as an adult. I'm so proud of him for not turning out to be a smoker like his parents. He broke the pattern. Best, Anne
bard Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 6:21 PM
Good day Anne I did turn out to be a smoker like both my parents . Started at age of eleven but gave up at age of twenty six Didn't drink a lot of alcohol but gave that away many years ago also Thank you for your reply blessings Douglas
Kendrick Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 4:46 PM
Ahh!! Nice one. Great that as an adult that the person made better choices as an adult and eating right and taking care of our bodies definitely does help with better health and longevity. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
bard Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 5:16 PM
good day Sara Nice to have someone on the same page Blessings Douglas
Vesalius Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 5:01 AM
Interesting, quite interesting
bard Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 2:16 PM
Good day Neve The body is a miracle when we give it what it needs. I have only eaten raw food for over 30 years Blessings Douglas
Terry Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 1:37 AM
I grew up with a similar poor diet, but I've added a multivitamin to my diet over the years to improve my health.
bard Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 2:14 PM
Hi Angela Thank you for your comments. I have never used any supplements Blessings Douglas
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