Mascara

a veil descended upon his restless soul

converted into apathy and grave sadness

no need to take off the mask of shadows

there was no living persona left to reveal


he dreamt of Venetian Carnival nights

but the only seduction was an illusion

of free flowing movement in stagnation

Henry was well versed in nagging despair


he had been living a pantomime in disguise

a rebel with course that led to destruction

now in the naked light of nothing to show for

his drama was an epitaph without real prologue


curtains drawn and only mocking applause

script empty and the protagonist sidelined

a prompter whispering mindless nothingness

an epic disaster personified with no hope


he tore his bleeding heart out of pulsation

ready to sever his wrists in an almighty gush

yet only red make up trickled upon his face

and rescued a lonely narration never to be

17th July 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/28/2020 12:58:00 PM
Your muse is a touching tale of pain and masked emotions Kai. Layered anguish drips from every line. Congratulations on your win! Blessings
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Date: 7/27/2020 12:36:00 PM
Kai, you have vividly captured the anguish of a tortured soul in this WINNING poem! Janice
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/28/2020 2:24:00 AM
Thank you Janice. I write the dark stuff quite a lot. I have been there but am very happy now. Kind and warm wishes, Kai
Date: 7/27/2020 4:27:00 AM
Kai, you captured the essence of unveiling the nature of masking one's soul with sadness through this dramatic narration. Congratulations for your fine placement in my contest. Mohan
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Date: 7/28/2020 2:27:00 AM
Thank you Mohan. I really appreciate that. Thank you aldo for sponsoring the contest. Kind wishes, Kai
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