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Marty and Jimmy

Marty intelligent, humble caring, forgiving, trusting father, pianist, son, writer giving, confusing, loving articulate, conceited Jimmy

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/28/2010 2:55:00 PM

I like it! excellent example of the form! Light & Love and sorry soup gremlin ate your soup mail to me!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2010 4:27:00 PM

So, at what point did Marty end and Jimmy start? I am guessing, Jimmy, did you come in on the part that says son? and if so, it makes me wonder in what way you would be confusing. I think it is fun to think of one's traits and write them out like this,especially combining them like this. You are very good friends, it's clear to tell. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2010 2:57:00 PM

Interesting duo. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Susan Palli

Date: 2/22/2010 11:19:00 AM

Nice composition

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/22/2010 10:21:00 AM

These are the characteristics of two beautiful people brought together to do good. Each helping the other in ways far beyond the their knowledge. Great job, JAM!! Very good Diamante! Very proud of you! Love always, Peanut butter

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/22/2010 10:17:00 AM

Wonderful tribute to one of my good friends and most talented poets,He is all this and much more.Charma