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Marty and Jimmy

Marty
intelligent, humble
caring, forgiving, trusting
father, pianist, son, writer
giving, confusing, loving
articulate, conceited
Jimmy

familyfatherlovesondiamante

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Debbie Guzzi

February 28, 2010 at 2:55 PM

I like it! excellent example of the form! Light & Love and sorry soup gremlin ate your soup mail to me!

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2010 at 4:27 PM

So, at what point did Marty end and Jimmy start? I am guessing, Jimmy, did you come in on the part that says son? and if so, it makes me wonder in what way you would be confusing. I think it is fun to think of one's traits and write them out like this,especially combining them like this. You are very good friends, it's clear to tell. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

February 22, 2010 at 2:57 PM

Interesting duo. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Susan Palli

February 22, 2010 at 11:19 AM

Nice composition

Audrey Haick

February 22, 2010 at 10:21 AM

These are the characteristics of two beautiful people brought together to do good. Each helping the other in ways far beyond the their knowledge. Great job, JAM!! Very good Diamante! Very proud of you! Love always, Peanut butter