Martian Christmas 2110

I would have loved Santa to have visited us here In his coat of red and his eight brown reindeer Sadly there is no atmosphere left on earth So we moved to Mars, it’s the place of my birth Hushed secret stories are told about Santa Claus But he’s outlawed here it’s against our laws We have a very regimented regime Images of Santa must never be seen We use the Internet to buy what we need Things are delivered next day at lightning speed I’ve been told about Santa and the days of old Just to mention his name on Mars is very bold Ancient history tells us of the amazing glory Of Jesus’ birth and of the Christmas story But during earth years it became very commercial With over indulgence which was controversial Sadly Martian children will never understand The delights of Christmas which forever is banned Finished too late to submit in the Futuristic Christmas Contest 01~01~16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Hello Jan... very clever write Jan. Be careful though; you may be judged as the next Nostradamus - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 6:05 PM
LOL Lindsay - I won't be around then to find out if Christmas is outlawed on Mars:-) hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Hi Jan, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Thanks Skat Happy New Year:-) hugs jan xx
Sage Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 7:54 PM
wow! you got it well written
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 6:47 AM
Thanks white sage:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 7:07 PM
777! Jan, I adore this poem..You are so clever and creative...-luloo *Happy New Year*
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 7:09 PM
I wrote it at the last minute for Vienna's contest when she asked in a blog for the contest to be filled - then I found it had already been judged lol so I thought I would post it anyway. Hope you have a great 2016 I am glad to see the end of 2015!!!! :-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 7:07 PM
777! Jan, I adore this poem..You are so clever and creative...-luloo *Happy New Year*
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 7:10 PM
:-) xx
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