Mars

Mars was visible last night But hidden out of sight By the clouds of the heights It was to be seen next to moon Won't be visible again soon For it will be 2020 when Appears and then Will it be the same or kin To a red firey ball Blazing in the sky Roaring through the heights Dominating the sky

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/29/2010 2:37:00 AM

Nicely written and observed, Sara! I am wondering what they will find on Mars when the first Astronauts will arrive there. Happy Easter! And thank you for your comments...Gert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/28/2010 3:24:00 AM

My lucky stars, a poem about Mars! Thanks. Sara, for the reminder, I need to look at it again. One more time. Have a super Sunday. Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2010 12:14:00 PM

very nice, Sara. Doris' poem brought me to see this one. I did not know of this and I missed it , darn it. Luv, Andrea

Brian Strand

Date: 3/27/2010 1:35:00 AM

Yes its does when visible Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/26/2010 7:53:00 PM

when mars is aside the moon, will be the time yet, another blazing flame will meet with her half, -his half- soul.you can never be prepared, Sara.great poem. -Always&Forever Lynette

John Freeman

Date: 3/26/2010 7:45:00 PM

I didn't get to see this interesting sight sara, but I see the beauty of it in your poem. Thanks for supporting my blog. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/26/2010 1:05:00 PM

I wrote another poem inspired by this one. and a burning image I saw in town today and can't get out of my mind. My eyes!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/26/2010 12:48:00 PM

Mars bars? yes?

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/26/2010 12:47:00 PM

very nice, hope you are well today with pollen in the air.

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/26/2010 9:52:00 AM

Beautiful poetry Sara.....:JP]

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2010 7:51:00 AM

This is intresting as well. Thanks

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2010 6:52:00 AM

So enjoyed reading your creative write today Sara.. Mars always known as the angry red planet but u have made it a pleasant subject .. luv..Linda-Marie..

Mitch White

Date: 3/26/2010 5:53:00 AM

Love it-I often stare at the stars, since I work at night. The Big Dipper is overhead now and I believe I saw Mars in the west Monday night