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Mars

Mars was visible last night
But hidden out of sight
By the clouds of the heights
It was to be seen next  to moon

Won't be visible again soon
For it will be 2020 when 
Appears and then
Will it be the same or kin

To a red firey ball
Blazing in the sky
Roaring through the heights
Dominating the sky

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Gert W. Knop March 29, 2010 at 2:37 AM Nicely written and observed, Sara! I am wondering what they will find on Mars when the first Astronauts will arrive there. Happy Easter! And thank you for your comments...Gert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 28, 2010 at 3:24 AM My lucky stars, a poem about Mars! Thanks. Sara, for the reminder, I need to look at it again. One more time. Have a super Sunday. Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2010 at 12:14 PM very nice, Sara. Doris' poem brought me to see this one. I did not know of this and I missed it , darn it. Luv, Andrea

Brian Strand March 27, 2010 at 1:35 AM Yes its does when visible Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Lynette Chachere March 26, 2010 at 7:53 PM when mars is aside the moon, will be the time yet, another blazing flame will meet with her half, -his half- soul.you can never be prepared, Sara.great poem. -Always&Forever Lynette

John Freeman March 26, 2010 at 7:45 PM I didn't get to see this interesting sight sara, but I see the beauty of it in your poem. Thanks for supporting my blog. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse March 26, 2010 at 1:05 PM I wrote another poem inspired by this one. and a burning image I saw in town today and can't get out of my mind. My eyes!!

Doris Culverhouse March 26, 2010 at 12:48 PM Mars bars? yes?

Doris Culverhouse March 26, 2010 at 12:47 PM very nice, hope you are well today with pollen in the air.

Jared Pickett March 26, 2010 at 9:52 AM Beautiful poetry Sara.....:JP]

Poet Destroyer A March 26, 2010 at 7:51 AM This is intresting as well. Thanks

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 26, 2010 at 6:52 AM So enjoyed reading your creative write today Sara.. Mars always known as the angry red planet but u have made it a pleasant subject .. luv..Linda-Marie..

Mitch White March 26, 2010 at 5:53 AM Love it-I often stare at the stars, since I work at night. The Big Dipper is overhead now and I believe I saw Mars in the west Monday night