Mars

Men came here from mars. Aliens through and through, I Realized this fact years ago. So they”really”don't understand us. Contest: Planet Sponsor: Matt Caliri 05/25/2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/28/2021 10:07:00 AM

What a coincidence that you wrote about Mars and I about Venus. I so enjoyed this short Verse and wish you ALL the best my dear friend in the contest. Love and hugs Jennifer.

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/26/2021 2:10:00 PM

So true Alexis, A Homer Simpson quote “ just because I don’t care, doesn’t mean I don’t understand” that’s men for you, lol great writing, cheers David. Ps yes I can see your planet Mars just fine

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/26/2021 1:05:00 PM

Hi everyone, Can you all see the planet Mars? I can see it just fine. Let me know:-) Alexis

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/26/2021 8:25:00 AM

That's something to ponder on... Nice write... Good luck in the contest,Alexis...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/25/2021 8:18:00 PM

All I can say is, You never know. They may be running things by now. Hard for me to believe that Putin, for example, is really flesh and blood. Xi too. Not to mention Mr. Kim in N. Korea, and the Mullahs from Iran. Help! Help! Aliens!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/25/2021 3:53:00 PM

Its often said they are living amongst us here on earth if I was a Martian Id be calling home. Lol Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/25/2021 1:40:00 PM

Very articulate, clever write, Alexis. All the best.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/25/2021 1:03:00 PM

Yes, this is very possible. Now Martians wish... to return home. Superb thought dearest, Alexis. Good luck my dearest friend. Hugs xxx

Judy Ball

Date: 5/25/2021 12:53:00 PM

Great Acrostic Alexis but I think you may have a typo in the second line. God Bless, JB

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/25/2021 12:56:00 PM

Hi Judy, Thank you so much. It's good to see you posting again:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2021 12:11:00 PM

Mothers need to teach their sons about hormones. My son gets along great because I taught him how to be sensitive and more understanding of moods. He and his wife have been together for almost 19 years now. Your poem is true to nature Alexis. Have a wonderful week. Blessings xxoo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/25/2021 10:49:00 AM

Your acrostic is to be admired. Best for a win. Sent you soup mail.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/25/2021 10:17:00 AM

Good imagery and symbolism, you penned a smart, original poem, Alexis. Best wishes for a win, blessings, and hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/25/2021 9:54:00 AM

I would agree “Men came here from Mars” that women came from Venus it’s written in the stars. Good one Alexis… Belle :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2021 9:42:00 AM

Your poem made me smile Alexis, they say women are from venus and men are from mars, perhaps they are all aliens lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/25/2021 9:48:00 AM

Lol! I agree, perhaps we all, lol. I appreciate that you stopped. Have a great day:-)Alexis