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Your Guide to 2020's Mars Retrograde | AllureMars Bar Cookies. Super easy, crispy treats using melted Mars bars! | Recipe | Mars bar, Mars chocolate bar, Crispy treats

Maybe – I wonder – just maybe – could there ever be A way to ever find in space those famous candy bars? Rocky, cold, red-dust covered is the planet with 1/3 our gravity. Someday perhaps we’ll bring those chocolate bars with us to Mars! For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No14 Poetry Contest

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Matt Caliri
Date: 11/20/2021 9:02:00 PM
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Congrats on finishing 12th out of 50 on my Planet contest from ages ago. Sorry just finishing judging now, bit I loved how cheeky this poem was, it was the only cheeky one out of 50 so had to place it. Nice work!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2021 3:21:00 PM
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Yummy ~ one of my favorite bars ~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2021 3:55:00 PM
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I actually don't l like it much, haha. I prefer Snickers (name of my dog too)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/19/2021 6:36:00 PM
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Lovely thoughts Andrea... and kit kat..my favorite...too.. please...Best wishes my sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 5/16/2021 11:52:00 AM
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Lovely thoughts... Brilliant writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Kenneth Cheney
Date: 5/16/2021 8:07:00 AM
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Can we fly on to the Milky Way. I like those better than Mars. Fun write
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2021 5:06:00 AM
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Why not, Andrea? It only takes dreams such as yours to get there-- as we certainly have. Sweet!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/16/2021 1:05:00 AM
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Superb Imagination.
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Jcb Brul
Date: 5/16/2021 12:43:00 AM
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What an entertaining piece of marvel!!! I love this!! a fave!!!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/15/2021 8:06:00 PM
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I like snickers better, The Mars family makes them both, so it's ok to sneak one in on the trip. Let's go...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/16/2021 7:52:00 AM
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Me too, let's sneak THOSE in too.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/15/2021 7:13:00 PM
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Great illustrations, Andrea. What can I say????
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Joseph May
Date: 5/15/2021 5:50:00 PM
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More Rovers than candy for now, Everyone is keen on Mars these days,
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/16/2021 7:52:00 AM
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Yes, those Rovers!!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/15/2021 4:22:00 PM
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Those mars bars are my downfall Andrea lol. Hope you're well. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/15/2021 4:46:00 PM
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I actually do not like them, Tom. I much prefer Snickers bars!! I should go get images to put with my Mars poem!!

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