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Mars

Maybe – I wonder – just maybe – could there ever be

A way to ever find in space those famous candy bars?

Rocky, cold, red-dust covered is the planet with 1/3 our gravity.

Someday perhaps we’ll bring those chocolate bars with us to Mars!



For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No14 Poetry Contest

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Matt Caliri Date: 11/20/2021 9:02:00 PM Congrats on finishing 12th out of 50 on my Planet contest from ages ago. Sorry just finishing judging now, bit I loved how cheeky this poem was, it was the only cheeky one out of 50 so had to place it. Nice work! Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2021 3:21:00 PM Yummy ~ one of my favorite bars ~ Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/24/2021 3:55:00 PM I actually don't l like it much, haha. I prefer Snickers (name of my dog too)

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 5/19/2021 6:36:00 PM Lovely thoughts Andrea... and kit kat..my favorite...too.. please...Best wishes my sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 5/16/2021 11:52:00 AM Lovely thoughts... Brilliant writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina Login to Reply

Kenneth Cheney Date: 5/16/2021 8:07:00 AM Can we fly on to the Milky Way. I like those better than Mars. Fun write Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2021 5:06:00 AM Why not, Andrea? It only takes dreams such as yours to get there-- as we certainly have. Sweet! Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 5/16/2021 1:05:00 AM Superb Imagination. Login to Reply

JCB Brul Date: 5/16/2021 12:43:00 AM What an entertaining piece of marvel!!! I love this!! a fave!!! Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 5/15/2021 8:06:00 PM I like snickers better, The Mars family makes them both, so it's ok to sneak one in on the trip. Let's go... Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/16/2021 7:52:00 AM Me too, let's sneak THOSE in too.

L Milton Hankins Date: 5/15/2021 7:13:00 PM Great illustrations, Andrea. What can I say???? Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/15/2021 5:50:00 PM More Rovers than candy for now, Everyone is keen on Mars these days, Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/16/2021 7:52:00 AM Yes, those Rovers!!

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/15/2021 4:22:00 PM Those mars bars are my downfall Andrea lol. Hope you're well. Tom Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/15/2021 4:46:00 PM I actually do not like them, Tom. I much prefer Snickers bars!! I should go get images to put with my Mars poem!!