Andrea Dietrich Poet Acrostic

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Mars

Maybe – I wonder – just maybe – could there ever be

A way to ever find in space those famous candy bars?

Rocky, cold, red-dust covered is the planet with 1/3 our gravity.

Someday perhaps we’ll bring those chocolate bars with us to Mars!



For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No14 Poetry Contest

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Matt Caliri November 20, 2021 at 9:02 PM Congrats on finishing 12th out of 50 on my Planet contest from ages ago. Sorry just finishing judging now, bit I loved how cheeky this poem was, it was the only cheeky one out of 50 so had to place it. Nice work!

Line Gauthier May 24, 2021 at 3:21 PM Yummy ~ one of my favorite bars ~ Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2021 at 3:55 PM I actually don't l like it much, haha. I prefer Snickers (name of my dog too)

Anitha Jayasankar May 19, 2021 at 6:36 PM Lovely thoughts Andrea... and kit kat..my favorite...too.. please...Best wishes my sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani

Regina Mcintosh May 16, 2021 at 11:52 AM Lovely thoughts... Brilliant writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Kenneth Cheney May 16, 2021 at 8:07 AM Can we fly on to the Milky Way. I like those better than Mars. Fun write

Vijay Pandit May 16, 2021 at 5:06 AM Why not, Andrea? It only takes dreams such as yours to get there-- as we certainly have. Sweet!

Christuraj Alex May 16, 2021 at 1:05 AM Superb Imagination.

JC Brul May 16, 2021 at 12:43 AM What an entertaining piece of marvel!!! I love this!! a fave!!!

Charlie Smith May 15, 2021 at 8:06 PM I like snickers better, The Mars family makes them both, so it's ok to sneak one in on the trip. Let's go... Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2021 at 7:52 AM Me too, let's sneak THOSE in too.

L Milton Hankins May 15, 2021 at 7:13 PM Great illustrations, Andrea. What can I say????

Joseph May May 15, 2021 at 5:50 PM More Rovers than candy for now, Everyone is keen on Mars these days, Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2021 at 7:52 AM Yes, those Rovers!!

Tom Cunningham May 15, 2021 at 4:22 PM Those mars bars are my downfall Andrea lol. Hope you're well. Tom Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2021 at 4:46 PM I actually do not like them, Tom. I much prefer Snickers bars!! I should go get images to put with my Mars poem!!