Married

I married her because she gave me what I wanted
most.I felt the warmth in every kiss,touch and hug.
Her heart was full of love me.Two young adults madly
in love,all we saw was us together forever,never thinking
about the for worse or for better.We went in with good
Intentions,so blinded by love and affection that we failed
to pay attention to the obvious.More money,more problems,
young and unprepaired we couldn't solve them.When we 
had nothin that's when we were the happiest but as she 
moved up,I stayed stuck and things got rough,what I 
had to offer was no longer enough.As she distanced herself,
I was losing her mentaly and when the affection died out I 
lost her emotionaly.The kisses and I love yous no longer
came from desire or passion,it became a routine of basic
actions.We are trying to hold on because the love is still
strong.Its a risk but all is worth it if love still exist.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/1/2010 7:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Amaris. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2010 5:21:00 PM
Well, I commend you for sticking with it so long. You both need to remember what made you want to be together in the first place and try to recapture "that" LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/30/2010 3:56:00 PM
wow, beautiful and hopeful write very inspiring, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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