Marriage: the Crucible

Work of the eyes is done, now
go and do heart work
on all the images imprisoned

— Rainer Maria Rilke


  Crucible: A severe test, as of patience or belief; a trial.  
   and
  A vessel made of a refractory substance such as graphite or porcelain, used for melting and    
calcining materials at high temperatures.


therefore
marriage is a severe test of our belief in each other
and ourselves
requiring
patience for change
acceptance in giving
life giving opportunity to be oneself
a test of patience with repetitive mistakes and fear
a trial
a life trial
moving forward with knowledge 
and heartbreak

a vessel then strong enough to withstand the heat of love
and time
where we melt together
again
again
again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Marriage is definitely the place for the test of maturity and the place for growth. Nicely done on a good subject. Keep writing. Sara
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